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Okay. I'm not really sure about the Romanian, but… if there's something wrong, let me know and I'll blame it on Google translate and change it.
Also, the reader is about 8 years old and Romania is your father. (random moment where movies get into your thoughts. 'Reader, I am your father…') Anyway, ON WITH DA STORY!

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You sighed as you looked out your window. All you saw was a bunch of trees and some mountains. And everything else included in the landscape of Romania. You always wanted to go outside but your tată* wouldn't allow you to. You couldn't figure out why. It wasn't like you didn't like your house… rather, mansion, but usually people aren't so specific, so…

Anyway. You hopped off your little seat by the window and wandered around. You never got bored with the seemingly endless hallways, each leading to so many different rooms. After exploring for a while, you found your way back to your room. And sat. You watched the clock tick as you waited. And waited. And waited.

Your tată was taking waaaaaaaaay too long to get back home. And that made you very restless. You skipped around your room in pure boredom. Then skipped to the window. You sat back down and stared outside, wondering what it was like. As you were daydreaming, you started dozing off. You suddenly had the urge to look out the window and saw something move in the forest nearby.

Probably just some random animal.

You sighed and closed the window, making your way over to your bed and flopping down on it. Soon you fell asleep.


~~~~Timeskip to the end of nap time~~~~


You jumped up from bed, thinking you heard a noise. A suspicious noise. Time to search.
You grabbed your stuffed flying mint bunny (you had tried to convince it to come to life so you wouldn't be so lonely, but it didn't understand. To make up for it, you took it everywhere.) and crept out of your room.

Stealth mode.

You heard something in the kitchen. Silently, you tiptoed towards the door. And peeked in to see…

Your father. And his back was facing you.

TIME FOR EVIL PRANKSTER MODE.

You carefully bent down and ducked behind the table, sneaking closer and closer to him.
You almost fell and managed to catch yourself in time. You looked down at you feet and saw that you tripped on a spoon. You looked back up, still hunched over behind the table and proceeded with your sneaking around.

"I know you're there, _________," said a voice close to your ear.
"WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!"  you screamed.

Then you whipped around and saw your dad standing right behind you, laughing.

You pouted and said, "You scared flying mint bunny."
"Flying mint bunny seems to have gotten the ability to scream through your mouth, I suppose."
"I swear it was the bunny, tată ."
"You shouldn't swear things that aren't true, _________."
"Awwww… okay."
"Esti o fata buna.**"

He patted you on the head and went on to cook dinner.

Such was the sequence of events that happened that day.
Wow. I think that’s the shortest story I’ve ever written in my life…
* tată (Edit: should be tati, but too lazy to correct them all) – Father, papa, dad, paternal figure, or something in that sense.
** Esti o fata buna. – You're a good girl. (and no, Romania isn’t calling you an overweight bun)

This is a request for TheMysteriousPoet. Sorry... It wouldn't let me put your name in the title. Said it was too long. And I personally thought the story was too short, but... XP (i'm not very good at doing Papa!countryxChild!readers...)
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AngelGirl9107 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I wish there was more of these!! Pikachu want it 
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murrayb Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student General Artist
I swear it was the bunny
()()
('.')
(")mm(")
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Achilleia Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol that's so cute!
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murrayb Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student General Artist
TY
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glaceon007 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconfrenchsquealplz:
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Achilleia Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I guess that's a good thing? : D
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OCTransylvaniaRP Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
How do you insert icons into the text?
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Achilleia Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
basically like this-
:iconput name of icon here, like yayitaly or me gusta or etc.:

remember one thing- to make sure it's an actual icon, click 'preview' (the button left of the add comment button, in case you can't find it XD)
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OCTransylvaniaRP Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
I look up the names of icons. Am I not supposed to add "plz" after the rest of the name?
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Achilleia Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
not necessarily, but the icons are actually people's account avatar picture things (and the words after 'icon' are their username). like for example, if i put my icon:
:iconachilleia:
there's no 'plz' after it, since it's not in my username. the 'plz' is actually part of the username, if there is one. hope that kinda cleared it up!
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OCTransylvaniaRP Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
OK. Thanks!
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Achilleia Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
np XD
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OCTransylvaniaRP Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
"And no, Romania isn't calling you an overweight bun"
Words cannot describe how hard I laughed.
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Achilleia Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol XD
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skye-pixie Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Can I correct the Romanian? *Tata should be "tati." It's the Romanian equivalent to "Daddy." **Buna fata should be "Esti o fata buna," which means "you are a good girl." I hope that helps. >///<

This is a very cute story, by the way. :)
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Achilleia Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it's gonna take too long to actually correct every tata -> tati, so... just going to put a note in the description... and thanks again!
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skye-pixie Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome. ^_^
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Achilleia Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ok i'll fix it! (gaaah. i swear, google... imma kill you someday...) and thanks!
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skye-pixie Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome. Google Translate is good some of the time. ^_^
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MurderScreamer Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
So....kawaii ^////^


Romania, you bastard! You scared Flying Mint Bunny ;-;

:iconsexyromaniaplz: ...sure I did..
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Achilleia Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
teehee! thanks! xD
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MurderScreamer Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
Xp no problamo~
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FullmetalHaruhi Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Jeg elster this!(thats I love in Danish)
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Achilleia Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yay! thank you!
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FullmetalHaruhi Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Denada!
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goodlucklight Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Kawaii~ :iconhandspazzplz:
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Achilleia Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD lol at the icon
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TheMysteriousPoet Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it was very cute!
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Achilleia Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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